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I found this in the adult section. I read the first one too. These are written at a teen level. And the author seems to be lacking in the art of storytelling. She shows promise, but she has a ways to go.

Some good stories. Mostly boring.

Terrible.

It's got too much in it that makes no sense to Americans. I read Jerusalem end to end. After the first chapter of this book I'd had enough. I'm not going through that again. I hear great things about the author. But you have to write for your audience, not yourself.

The first book was good, this one leaves a lot to be desired. It's like they really had to dig to find any stories to put into it. And they settled for things that most people wouldn't want to read.

M'eh

My first reading of a Davis Dun book. Excellent.

Lame short stories. When I said I've finished this book, it means I can't read any more.

Easy to understand. History to just a few years ago. Great for someone who doesn't follow physics and astronomy and wonders about...

After quite a few years I finally got to this second book. Easy read, easy to get into, good pace mostly. Don't read this until you read book one.

After quite a few years I finally got to this second book. Easy read, easy to get into, good pace mostly. Don't read this until you read book one.

It's developing well.