I’m not a fan of Jenny being such a major role in this book; not because of the dynamic but because her dialogue does not seem fitting for a kid. Like idk but the kids I know around her age don’t talk like that. That’s not unique to Kate Canterbary, but I feel like so many authors don’t know how to/aren’t great at writing kids dialogue
— Jun 16, 2026 04:48PM
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