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This is terrible.

The writing is amateur and the plot AND characters are uninspired, at best.

Plus, why do they have to be so mean about the dog?? Ew.

I read this like…..10+ years ago or whenever it came out and I loved it. However, I’m reading it now and this writing style is so much on my nerves it’s becoming unreadable.

Just stop with the strikethrough and the repeating words. It’s overdone.

Oliver needs to be the one to die. What an asshole.

I’m just saying, have you ever heard of a scope on a rifle, Oliver? Are you familiar with its purpose?

And also, really? A mole? Come on.

I hate Nesta. What a cunty bitch. What a miserable, cunty bitch.

Chapter 29….. like are we for real right now?
Talk about an exposition dump. Big fail.

Are you fucking kidding me?

I didn’t think I could hate Tory more, but I do.

I really, really hate Tory in this installment. She used to be the stronger twin, but she’s weak.

And I’m so over this feud with Darius. They’re both hateful. I can’t tolerate it anymore.

This isn’t creating tension, it’s creating frustration, and using it as a plot device is such a mistake.

On behalf of Spanish-speaking people everywhere… I’m *c r i n g i n g*

Wow. This is, uh… something. Sure is something.

I don’t think I can do this. This writing is amateurish at best.

People love this series, so I’m gonna try. But I really don’t think I can.

This character makes REALLY stupid decisions. I don’t know if I can finish this. She’s not that likeable at all.

Oh my GOD. This is painful to get through. I’ve never read so many clichés in one breath of dialogue. I can’t even…

Oh my God… Maddox is unbelievable. This is some bullshit if I’ve ever heard it.

Ugh. And now we’re explaining what a reverse harem is. Wow. On the nose.
Disgust. This is worse than I thought and I’m what… still only two chapters in. Beyond.