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Very slow starting. Sticking with it. Something has to happen soon..

Second attempt at this book...

Only six percent into this "uncorrected proof" and it's so far brilliant. No slow build up, straight into the action.

Dear oh dear. this is getting monotonous - typos, continuity errors. I had been uncomfortable with the phrase "coffee coloured skin" to describe Harry - an Indian man in nearly every book but very jarring in 2021 (and classed as offensive) is the phrase "coloured" when referring to afro-carribean men...

I will finish the series being this far through but after a brief pickup, it's getting harder and harder to read.

Doesn't give you much hope when amazon state that the book contains quality issues which have been reported to the author.

Started with the usual pattern.
1. Body found (usually on Clapham Common)
2. Victim is either related to or has a connection with someone in power.

Next steps usually Arla told not to question family , she does anyway, boss threatens to remove her, she carries on and solves crime...we will see

Enjoying this but still the little sloppy mistakes. Buy this series even it's just so the author can buy an AA Streetmap from The Works and learn that NOTTINGHAM IS NOT IN THE WEST MIDLANDS

Enjoying story BUT there is no way this book should have been released with the state it is in. You have car journeys where Harry is driving and then all of a sudden it's Arla, a suspects girlfriend who works in a record shop and part time bartender. Later in the book she suddenly is a Manager at Starbucks. Needs an editor badly!!!