Sean Gillam > Recent Status Updates

Good but boring at times. It’s VERY long… lots of moments that seem drawn out for the purposes of being drawn out.

I am enjoying it but I find myself wanting the story to get on with it at times. Like COMMEEE OONNN I get it she might lose control. Just do or don’t.

The built up suspension seems unnecessary and breaks the flow.

Kind of dry. I am bored at this point.

Interesting. The writing style is hard to understand at times. I think that comes with a good editor though.