It’s alright. Pacing is good. We don’t know the world in depth and at first I wasn’t sure what time period this nightmare-come-true world was in but I’m happy to place it in some au parallel to our current world where a hundred years prior nightmares started coming to life. It does have some aspects of a dystopian world but mostly just lack of electricity. Ness is 70% likable and relatable for a mc.
— May 14, 2023 07:12PM
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