Ugh. Not sure I'll be able to finish this. The story is interesting, but the text needs a real editor SO BADLY. It reads like it was written two paragraphs at a time by a rotating cast of authors who only vaguely recall what came before the part they're supposed to write next. I don't mind the pace, and like I said the story is interesting, but it's just so badly written I'm constantly rolling my eyes.
— Sep 30, 2026 04:24PM
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