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DNF! Terrible dialogue, nonsensical responses that the other person found clever?! I had to reread conversations to try to understand wtf they meant. Cheesy, but not in a good way. I read spoilers to make sure I wasn't missing out on some great development that saves the story. This is a great premise, but the execution is severely lacking. Maybe do some basic research to try to find her identity? TSTL

#1 was not great had promise but went nowhere

DNF

Dull

I can't do the sexual violence. DNF

Pretentious and gross first chapter.

Starting off with some victim-blaming.

The way every character talks about gay characters is too much. There is even a scene where someone says it's too much and the Main Badass mocks him, because he's being a pussy.

More animal rape, this time by a person and to death.

The conversations seem robotic or stilted. Maybe it's the lack of contractions?

Amazing, sad, beautiful