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Okay, I see whats happening here

Is anything going to happen in this book?

Hmmm.

Book 4. Suddenly the best friend's name got a spelling change. The typos and odd formatting, whatever. But a name change?!

Actual line: "What the hell was going on with my lady parts?"

I hope the rest of the book can keep up.

I just realised these books are basically the plot and characters of Twilight.

Also, the jealous teenage villain is the smartest character in the entire cast and... it pains me.

I swear the main character is dumber than bricks. And supposedly a med student at Temple. Okay.

Also the fact that that is the least believable part of this book involving aliens and parallel worlds should say something.

OMG a plot. Well, conflict at least.

Hi. Where's the plot? I just realised that nothing of importance has happened yet.

I don't think anyone edited or progress this book. b had to read a page 5 times to understand that they used the wrong character name twice on it, making it the most confusing exchange I've ever read. and I read 50 shades.

The book opens with some things meant to intrigue then goes to a flash back labeled "two days earlier". four days go by and we aren't even back at the opening scene and I'm wondering if this book is worth my time.

She keeps using "on line" instead of "in line" and I just noticed and now I can't stop.

My copy actually has only 299 pages, so I'm just over 50% done.