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Ten percent in, and I can see where this is going. I’m not sure yet whether I want to follow along.

I like that done scenes are only alluded at, not excessively belabored

These actually a story free, and I like it

Apparently, AI will allow machines to drain all judgment, satisfaction, and meaning from human work and ultimately make human life meaningless? Can we dial it down a notch?

What’s the point?

Fast-paced present-tense writing.
Alternating POVs (not advertised as such) in the third person.
Very short book.

Read ten percent so far, and what’s the point?

Interesting so far, and I like the POVs. I just wish all POVs were in the first person.

Very long exposition

This is sad

Finally all the secrets are out (I hope)

Big confrontation coming up

Big confrontation ahead

That was hot

Getting to the good part

Something is happening

Interestingly, we’re at the same point in both books, but the other is further along in terms of percentage.