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Halfway through and it’s mostly porn. Where is the mystery of the first two chapters?

Extremely confusing adventure burning through every possible trope at warp speed

I can’t put it down

What’s this Britney thing all about!

“God! I was the worst person on the planet, always thinking of myself.”

Ten percent in, and I can see where this is going. I’m not sure yet whether I want to follow along.

I like that done scenes are only alluded at, not excessively belabored

These actually a story free, and I like it

Apparently, AI will allow machines to drain all judgment, satisfaction, and meaning from human work and ultimately make human life meaningless? Can we dial it down a notch?

What’s the point?

Fast-paced present-tense writing.
Alternating POVs (not advertised as such) in the third person.
Very short book.

Read ten percent so far, and what’s the point?

Interesting so far, and I like the POVs. I just wish all POVs were in the first person.