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At this point, I’m so ready for this book to be done. I want to know how it ends, but it’s getting more and more painful to read. I’m really tired of Everly’s constant hissy fits. There’s just so much in this book that’s just too much.

These books seriously need better editors or proof readers or something!

“She snapped her fingers, and the entire fiery scene in front of them vanished, along with the beasts, leaving no trace behind, not even scorch marks.”

Then a few sentences later . . .

“They surveyed the carnage, including a large scorch mark in the middle of the town square,”

There are lots mistakes and they seem to just get worse