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Rh is 45% done with The Name of the Wind (The Kingkiller Chronicle, #1)
Lore is good. Editing could use work. Certain phrases are repeated, and it’s annoying. The “buy in” from the reader fails because the story isn’t believable; the troubles the MC gets into arise from clear stupidity and poor choices, but we’re supposed to believe this character is a prodigy? Get real.
Nov 20, 2025 07:09AM Add a comment
The Name of the Wind (The Kingkiller Chronicle, #1)

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