Not quite 1/4 into the book and I like the story so far but the writing is driving me crazy. It is the perfect example of TELLING and not SHOWING. The book has adult themes with YA explanations.
How is Saeris deferential to the queen who is threatening to kill her yet a total ass to the scary fae king?? That literally shows two different personalities. Who gets transported into a fae realm and is an asshole?? Ugh.
— Aug 18, 2025 03:45AM
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