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The story in general and the mystery behind Patch's character and motivations were interesting enough. But sometimes I can't wrap my head areound the fact that these are high school kids, gallivanting about town sleuthing on stalkers and casually speculating that a newfound transferee might be a murderer. All the while the parents are just shadowy figures in the background. So implausible.

Wavy's life is just so tragic, your chest will hurt, and wonder why people who should never be allowed to have kids, are gifted with them anyway. Her strong but subtly changing bond with Kellen is both so right and so wrong, that I fear only heartbreak will come of it. I dearly hope that Iam wrong and this is a HEA story after all.

Lots of fighing: cat fighting between sisters, the h &H, h vs jason's gf. Complete with sprained hand, bruised stomach, stitches for the H, its unreal, idiotic, immature and not fun/hot at all.

Painfully trudging through this. I dont find the characters compelling enough, and the conflict seems very petty and shallow. The writing is just ok. Maybe I'm just too old fir this shit.

So far, its absolutely riveting! The writing is excellent, the pace just right, and for only $2.99.