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I'm remembering this is the series where no one takes Caitlin seriously.

Not overly thrilled with this yet. His dog handling technique leaves a lot to be desired, and I highly doubt Falcon was taught to stick his muzzle in a perps mouth. (I have met police dogs and their handlers in real life.) I really didn't like the way dog training school was portrayed, let alone the smoker lighting up in someone else's house.

Cor. Gunfire already. 🙄

Now we have another dodgy police officer. The author has a thing for guns and police.

And here is the gun shot. I thought with the accident we'd get away without a firearm making an appearance, but...no.

7% in, and what do you know...we have people shooting at others.

...not the hotel window...the car. But yes. Another gunshot at the hotel.

Oh look. Now they're going to a hotel. What's the bet the gunman shoots the window there too?

Sadly these are all starting the same way. "Oh noes! Someone is missing! Let's call the Sullivans, not the police!" Then there is a gunshot. It's very formulaic and the typos shit me.

This one is much better than the first two. I almost stayed up to read it.

Seriously?? She just got off the phone from telling the tribal police about the fire so they could sent the firies: "she used her phone to call the tribal police to notify them of the fire."...and now she's calling the tribal police "something she should have thought to do the minute they saw the fire."

I have no bloody idea why no one is involving the police "oh, a kids missing, let's just call a search and rescue team, rather than police.'

I already have problems with this. Why are they just listening to this bloke who hasn't introduced himself as anyone other than the brother?

Mia's meekness and ability to stand up for herself is shitting me. I've an idea where it comes from, but still.

It has turned out to be what I thought, but the method of execution was very different.

This seems rather like a very watered down version of Outlander, right down to a broken hand, helping a mare give birth and a Beatles song. This MC went to war and survived it in a matter of paragraphs, rather than several chapters.

I'm ready to divorce Sharyn. How they've been 'happily married' for 35 years is beyond me.

3% in and we are faced with "all be it", rather than "albeit." 😑

First we have HOGS wallop (not codswallop) and now we have people breeching confidentiality (not breaching). Seriously, I need to apply for a proof reading job for this author.

F-ing NO ONE is going to hole up in a building drinking when the town is under threat of fire.