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Honestly I love how terrible of a person she is

This is reading VERY young and trying VERY hard to be quirky and sassy. It used the term “zooted”

Some qualms I’m having: there are times where the dialogue will say something and the next paragraph repeats it like I didn’t get it. Like “it’s been diluted” and then the next paragraph says “so its been diluted”

Also the man character has so much plot armor it’s getting boring.

I have a feeling I’m going to hate this. Once again The Princess Bride as a comp title. And I did not enjoy the princess bride

I’m loving this so far!

Fun fact about me, I do not like the princess bride. A bit fun fact about this book it’s suggested for fans of the princess bride.

I’m having SUCH a hard time with the disconnect between the serious prologue and how immature Fi is. Idk if I can handle it.

I'm liking everything a lot - minus the reason for wanting to "get even"

This reads quite juvenile in the blurs of background info shoved into paragraphs

I’m not sure if it’s because this is a spin off series, but I feel like there’s been like no world building.

She’d outright lie to protect someone that she thinks could potentially be a mole/traitor?

UGH. I’m not liking this rn. It’s VERY juvenile. Like I’d believe this was like middle YA. And it’s so trope heavy rn. The big bad scary prince, the couldn’t care less heroine, the magic school where you could die, the sassy banter etc.

The dialogue is stiff. And there an ellipses or a dash EVERY PAGE.

I don’t think I like this?

I had such high hopes for this. But so far it’s full of a bunch of characters I cannot discern between other than Jason Bourne.

Not to mention there’s no urgency, flat dialogue, and repetition of items that makes this nothing like what I was expecting.

“She tastes like peppermint. Like peppermint and the first bite of a fresh orange”

GROSS??

I’m just not liking it. DNF

Knowing Blake was in a sorority makes this funnier

If I didn’t know better I’d think I skipped book 1

I still cannot get over the chosen timeline for this book.

“It had been years in the mortal world but only months for him” INSTANTLY makes me not okay

He included bye Felicia