UGH. I’m not liking this rn. It’s VERY juvenile. Like I’d believe this was like middle YA. And it’s so trope heavy rn. The big bad scary prince, the couldn’t care less heroine, the magic school where you could die, the sassy banter etc.
The dialogue is stiff. And there an ellipses or a dash EVERY PAGE.
— Jan 07, 2026 12:53PM
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