I am only halfway through, but I am already wondering who the editor was and why there is so much repetition. it's almost as if it's an exercise of "what words can we eliminate" and "how can we make this read better"? it's also setting up way too many twists, which is annoying.
I'll finish it, but I absolutely do not like how it is written. story=good. writing=bad.
— May 22, 2025 07:16PM
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