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"Elias ducks into the crypt after me, his height forcing him into a half crouch. In the tight space, our arms brush, and he draws a sharp breath. But when I look up, his face is angled toward the tunnel."

seriously? SERIOUSLY?

"I was familiar with my father’s laboratory. I’d been his apprentice for nearly a year now. It was stuffed with cupboards and counters and microscopes and tables, laden with koch dishes and books and every shape and size of furniture crowded into whatever space was left" is that supposed to be a discription?

they don't talk or act like it's a historical fiction ,

"aware of every muscle in his fingers" does fingers have muscles?

"why are you trying to help me?” I ask. “You didn’t want to risk the men to save my brother" because that's really important when you're brother is dying and you have a pretty difficult job ahead , because someone in her situation will have a mind to feel a fluttering in her stomach when he's inspecting her wounds.

it was better off an article not a novel.

"I pulled out my pad of paper and started to take notes. As she spoke, I got more and more excited; the project sounded huge, and had a lot of potential to influence the direction of Heaven Sent." really? she can't make up any project?

" I feel safe with you." how the fuck does she feel safe with him? she barely knows him

"I figured it was safer than a prostitute or even a one-night stand." uh, ok

prostitute not escort*

why is she asking for a surrogate in the first place? and why is she acting as if she's diseased or something? she's a virgin which could easily be changed if she hired an escort (if her virginity scares guys that much)

The two abduction incidents; so the guy tried to grab them in both case but.. they just say that someone attempted to abdeuct them but they say nothing about how they escaped or how he failed.

I don't get why she says she can't sleep with him again? because when he finds out she loses her job? but she'll lose it even if she didn't sleep with him again or is she scared about the job policy so they can't be found out?

Rob's not funny

she looked at me carefully. “Dex. I was stupid. I gave up. I thought I couldn’t live a life with Max because he’d remind me that I wasn’t normal." really? I kept waiting for the big reason to come because what the fuck , he gave up his immortality for her and because he reminds her she isn't normal she just gave up ?

"His name is Jacob and he is a descendant of all the Jacobs. Now, what is a Jacob?" I'll never stop the giddy feeling I get when a character appears in two totally different series.

I think everyone will reach a point and run out of tears . Its nature . So why doesn't she run out yet or get dehydrated or sth