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"Elias ducks into the crypt after me, his height forcing him into a half crouch. In the tight space, our arms brush, and he draws a sharp breath. But when I look up, his face is angled toward the tunnel."

seriously? SERIOUSLY?

"I was familiar with my father’s laboratory. I’d been his apprentice for nearly a year now. It was stuffed with cupboards and counters and microscopes and tables, laden with koch dishes and books and every shape and size of furniture crowded into whatever space was left" is that supposed to be a discription?

they don't talk or act like it's a historical fiction ,

"aware of every muscle in his fingers" does fingers have muscles?

"why are you trying to help me?” I ask. “You didn’t want to risk the men to save my brother" because that's really important when you're brother is dying and you have a pretty difficult job ahead , because someone in her situation will have a mind to feel a fluttering in her stomach when he's inspecting her wounds.

it was better off an article not a novel.