This has the tone of a mystery/detective and it is not one of my fav genres. Mock Victorian prose is okay, except for the addition of the words: 'correlation' and 'jettisoned.' Both I believe would not have been in usage at that time. That threw me off of the immersion into the flow of the author's voice. Also what is it with the "We, will now present to you," narrative intrusion? Am I being too critical
— Aug 31, 2014 09:29PM
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