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"I panicked and diarrhea of the mouth developed"
Well, isn't that lovely?

Can you consider me?
Chapter 77

Seventh Story: Better storytelling out of the bunch. A little men. 

Sixth Story: Too corny, too clunky? It didn't flow at all. If the previous stories were fast-paced, this one was light-speed.

Sixth Story: Too corny, too clunky? It didn't flow at all. If the previous stories were fast-paced, this one was light-speed.

Fifth Story: Pining, pining, pining… eh? Not much to say about this one. Too fast-paced towards the end. It's like an extra story from another series.

His nipples were hard as erasers??????

Fourth Story: A little too fast-paced. Maybe because it apparently is a sneak peek at a new series? It felt like we never really got to know Zane? Nick had more of a presence than him. The last few pages turned into a sappy life lesson. Bleh

Third Story: Nothing special. One is extremely sexually active, the other not so much. Typical shy-extroverted couple.

Second Story: A Gay for you tale. There's cheating involved. Not the best.

First Story: Absolutely hated that Kyle guy. Wanted to drop it 2 pages in.

A really watered down version of Darcy's marriage proposal…

A mention of BTS?? Really? I'm side eyeing you so hard, Penny…

Oof. This doesn't bode well. 2% in and there's already a mistake in Spanish.

"¿Cómo es el?" means "How is he?" when talking about personality.

"¿Cómo está / cómo se encuentra?" would be the best choice if they want to know how he's feeling.

The number of times this author's used "I could care less" instead of "I couldn't care less" is too damn high

I'm close to finishing the book and I still don't know how I feel about it. The misunderstandings and wrong assumptions are making me mad...

Our hero actually uses the words "virginal blood". Please, shoot me.

I'm so close to DNFing this book. The female character's voice is so annoying amd everything seems so fake.

She talks about being wary of people and not trusting anyone because of her past yet she's perfectly okay with a random guy following her?

I'm so close to DNFing the fuck of this book. Date = Fecha?? ONLY IF YOU'RE USING GOOGLE TRANSLATE TO WRITE THIS MOTHER EFFING BOOK!!!!!
WHATEVER THE HELL HAPPENED HERE??
IF YOU DON'T KNOW THE LANGUAGE, PLEASE, SPARE US THE BUTCHERING!!!!

Did no one check the Spanish being used hear? "Pasar el la pelota? TF is that??

At least the girl acknowledges she's an idiot...

My god, this girl is so dense. I can't stand her

I'm having serious problems enjoying this book. I had such high expectations and now I'm utterly bummed. And I had to stop because "They looked... woke" is an actual line in the book. Enough with trying to add all these new references... Ugh
Luc, where are you? Come save this book.

At this point, I'm really forcing myself to finish this book. Are teens really that shallow? I can't believe someone read this and thought most of their conversations were plausible or even good. I'm so done with this book and the characters...

I'm40 pages in and I'm already considering DNFing this book. It's so juvenile, the characters sound really really young.