"I'm starting to think my first guess about them is right. With that kind of fierce loyalty, they have to be lovers.
I am not jealous. Nope. That pit of ugliness spreading inside my chest isn't jealousy. It can't be"
Not only is this quote cringe as hell, but it's a consistent problem I'm seeing within this book and most books nowadays. I saw someone call it a "tell not show" thing in books and that's exactly right.
— Dec 05, 2023 11:21AM
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