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yeah no end the chapter with a bang that was great lol. Im not expecting a whole lot from this I just remember considering reading it in 2009

and yet I am still calling this man Crowfeather in my head rip

I'm still reading that man's name as Crowfeather, SenLinYu I'm sorry

I swear I am picking up a FMA influence, but I don't hate it and I really enjoy the world building as many recent fantasy/romance books have reeaaally skimped on that

I just need to know if anyone else got Full Metal Alchemist vibes from some of this worldbuilding

I actually like this world building ngl i know some people think its too much or whatever but i think its what has been lacking in many other recent books. idk if its entirely my personal favorite but not because of any flaws so far

this is exactly what I like to read and I am deeply enjoying myself

honestly just enjoying it more than expected

i want to like it but the writing is soo clunky i might pause reading it. You do NOT need to use a characters name that many times in a sentence about the same character. its making it harder to read and i am having trouble getting pulled in from how clunky it makes reading the work

its a tad verbose, i dont mind but like it is