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One of the chapters is less than 2 full pages long and is focused on a character that has not yet been introduced. I do not know who this man is or why I should care. Also I do not understand the constant need to remind us that Carole's car is a Mercedes.

This boom is struggling to hold my attention. The chapters are rather short and the writing makes me have to reread some lines several times to understand it. Its clunky and difficult to focus on. Im so frustrated with the Cairo incident because all I know about it was that it was bad and there was a dead body.