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On page 72... the former Dom's name just changed from Geoff to Gary. My expectations just dropped even further for this one :(

I'm very confused. How is Jesse 6 years older than Sam if he was an infant when Sam was a toddler (when Sam's mom got the job at the ranch). And if the dad blamed Jesse for his wife's death, when did Jesse get a full, not half, younger brother? Am I missing something? I'm pretty sure I read that right...

I'm just not getting into this one right now... I think I'll have to shelve it for a while and come back another time...

The random use of italics for POV shifts is getting distracting!

Stupid evil job not letting me keep reading - sucks you in... grrr...

So good!

I've read about 4 pages so far an already three very obvious spelling errors. Till is not the abbreviation for until!!!

Poor Alex :*(

Not really into the characters at all yet. Hopefully it'll get better...