I’m not in love with the first person where El talks to the audience, but it’s an easy enough thing to get over. The footnotes are funny, although again I don’t love the breaking of the wall. They can also be mildly distracting in that I feel something is missed if they’re not read, but they do tend to take me out of the story a bit and get in the way.
— Jan 04, 2026 07:48AM
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