I hate how much she could show us, but instead the protagonist TELLS US.
Or how every other couple of pages she talks about devlin, and love, and his ghosts, i mean I KNOW you are OBSESSED w/the man, give me a break, let the plot move forward, PLEASE!
And christ, how she starts telling us about her past or something she remembers, and talk SO MUCH about it, I forget what was happening in the first place.
— Nov 05, 2016 02:52PM
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