~50% in and this book needs an editor, whole chapters could be cut out and nothing would change. I am convinced that Liz has NEVER been to Chicago, this book could take place in Houston i or fucking Johannesburg South Africa and nothing would change. I don't understand where the choice was made that they liked each other and wanted to start something physical! Only finished so this isn't my 3rd DNF in a row.
— Jul 28, 2026 01:28PM
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