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My book is mostly msotly about standing up and being brave. I say this because she stands up to her dad, she also broke Rosaleen out of jail and the hospital to run away from T-RAY (her dad). She ran away from her home and went to go find people her knew her mom. She is traveling to find a certain place where she thinks her mom has been even tough she coudl caught and get hurt by Tray if he finds her

The characters behavior helps her accomplishments when she is trying to fight her dad. Not in a bad way or anything. But her dad is abusive like he makes her sit on broken glass for hours on end, he slams her to the ground. She is brave and stands up to him and she said "IM NOT SCARED OF YOU" and she did fight him with words with showing no fear

The authors note in my book so far since I just started would be to understand mistakes happen because when she was 4 she held a gun and it went off and it had killed her mom. But i do not think that is true because the dad is being suspicious about it because he got really mad when he figured out she remembered what happened that day.

I just started my book, and well the mother makes a lot of decisions on her own.. SHe paints walls different colors and now she is 50 years old and is adopting a baby. I don't she is cabale of this and she is only doing it because her husband has died. I just think its crazy

My book seems like a mystery. Nick is a very quiet person with a criminal record. And now he is accused of stealing from someone he never would. No one knows what happened but I predict he did steal because of his record and how secretive he is being about it. He also ended up with coins that he stole.

I would change the character's behavior, I would choose Celicia. I say her because she is so secretive and doesn't help Radley with anything. i think she should open up to her since Radley has been helping and taking care of her for all this time

In my book, I predict Celia is going to die, not to sound rude. But she is getting skinnier and weaker by the day of lack and food. It states her mom was an alcoholic and they have no one there for her. ANd also it is started to approach winter time in Canada, so it is going to start getting colder and harder to live in a schoolhouse.

a good trait in my character is to be brave and persistent. The police are after her for no reason and she needs to make it to Canada to find her parents. She needs to walk for days in pain and she needs to find her and she won't give up since she just got to Canada.

the story seems realistic because the author explains the inner feeling of the character which can make the story interesting and extend the thought throughout the book. And the things she faces is realistic, loosing her parents happens, and also not even being able to find food and just theses struggles can happen to a lot of people

The problem my charactre has is that she can't find her parents, and she is alone traveling with a dead cell phone. I think she needs to find her way home but to get help from someone because she will not survive alone. I think this because she only has 50 cents and well that sin't very helpful. SHe scraps for food and that could make her sick if she eats old food.

I can tell my book is in the future, because on page 7, it said that everyone had cellphones and telephones no longer exist.And cell phones are something new so it can't be in the past. I don't know what would happen if it were earlier since I just started the book.

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During my reading, I usually zone off and reread. I think this is because I just skim through the writing and then there is something I don't understand so I have to reread. I may do this because I just don't find things interesting but they can still be really important.

My main character Lev, doesn't make good choices. He is a tithe, and it is part of his religion to be unwound. And he disobeyed by running away with Connor and Risa. He actually ran away twice but he turned himself in. He finally got to the harvest cam but he looks at COnnor and Risa like their nothing because they are there because of trouble

Lev arrived at the camp. I predict that he won't make it til he is 18. MOstly because that book told me he was only 13.. It must be hard staying hidden for 5 years, and well he seems to change his mind alot. He turned himself in and then he felt sorry. SO he escaped. ANd i think he will make a mistake like that again

the main character in my story wants to live 18 so they can't get unwound. To accomplish this they have to stay hidden at the graveyard for 2 more years and honestly need to make sure they don't get caught by the police.

I predict that someone will get caught being unwound because I am only half way done and unwound for title must have something to do with a character actually getting unwound to make the book interesting. instead of just the thoughts about it.

The authors craft is telling the book from different views of the story and it showed Connor and how he wants to fight Roland but he can't fall for the bait. He acts cool about it but on the inside he seems afraid because he thinks Roland

I would not hang out with Risa. I think she is kind of controlling and she gets mad a lot. Like she got so mad for Connor caring about the baby that she didn't want. And she got mad that she missed it. SHe is kind of confusing.

I predict that COnnor will live to 18 to get the letter to send his letter. I think this because he will try to hide and stay safe just so his parents can read the letter and see what they have done and they will be lucky her even lived. ANd mostly even, escape. I wonder where Lev is, they totally ditched him.

A constant theme in my book is to never give up hope and be brave> I say this because Risa and Connor do not want to be unwound. SO they are brave by running from the police, taking a baby to cover up their tracks and trust sonia who they don't even know to keep them safe until age 18...

What if Lev can't get out of the high school? Risa knows hes gone.. The grounds of the school were guarded... WHat was Lev thinking? SInce Lev was "kidnapped" it might be hard for hi since actually no one knew what happened.

A technique my author uses is showing different view points through out the story. AT the beginning of every chapter, is says the view point of the character telling the story and their feelings.

Unwind is my stories biggest problem for my main characters. Unwind is where they basically kill you and Connors parents signed him up for that. He has to escape until he is 18 when he is an official adult which is only 2 years away. It seems really scaring having to hide for 2 years afraid for your life.

The setting affects because since Daisey has gotten revived so many times, she needs to switch homes since people thinks shes dead. It hides the governments secret and so the choices could affect her by the people she meets and how she can keep the secret. Also it depends on if there are bees and that could kill her since it tells us she has died from bees, and she needs to be careful