Things I’ve taken away so far:
- fisted is used waaaay too often
- also just call it a vagina. That’s what it is. Repeatedly calling it ‘her sex’ gets old quick
- this goes from cute rom com/chick lit to soft core porn quite quickly.
- Michael going from telling Stella ‘no one forces you to do anything’ in one breathe to basically forcing her to kiss him because he ‘needs’ it really rubbed me the wrong way
— Mar 08, 2019 01:13AM
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