really good world-building. It’s a perfect blend of realistic and fictitious fantasy.
I think timeline spacing could be better tho. More than half of the book takes place in the span of like 1 week in the story. I feel like the progression could have been more digestible if the book spanned the course of 1 year idk.
Not done yet tho so maybe there’s a reason why it’s formatted this way.
— Dec 02, 2023 02:21PM
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