I think the narration is switching between telling the story, the narrator including commentary, and also addressing me/the reader. While cool as a concept, I don't feel the narrator is distinguishing these very well, so I have moments of confusion wondering who is talking, then have to back up to re-listen.
Also there are a lot of characters... I'm interested, but also a tiny bit frustrated. May try to get the ebook
— Jul 10, 2025 03:30PM
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