The storyline is not horrible, but the author has never been in a hospital and has some huge misconceptions about the female anatomy... (such as the fact that the hymen is not located in the urethra and that taking off or messing with any medical hook ups while under care in a hospital results in a nurse in your room in seconds.) The language of the dialog is very stilted.The kids speak the same way as the adults.
— Feb 23, 2018 07:42AM
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