Hmm this is far too boring a novel to complement one of my favourite Star Wars movies. The writing is so flat. Galen hasn’t seen his wife or baby for six months and this is how the scene goes down:
"She's beautiful," he said, inspecting her face. "Her eyes have changed color."
Lyra nodded. "They're sort of flecked."
"Stardust," Galen said. "That's what's in her eyes.”
Awful phrasing and no emotion…
— Dec 05, 2023 08:29AM
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