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I started out with great interest in this book, and the storyline seemed interesting. However, I am only a third of the way through it, and the comma splices, run-on sentences and other grammar errors are so distracting that I don't think I can stand to finish the story.

Young women, running from untenable situations, find romance in Montana, or Colorado or California. One young woman who had lost her faith in God began to find it again. The problem is, the run-on sentences, comma splices, misspellings, subject-verb discrepancies and in one instance, repeated references to an 18-year-old as "a little child" set my teeth on edge so badly that I am not sure I can stand to finish!

Scariest book I ever read!