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Also. These are the most pathetic mind magicians ever. Where are the offensive capabilities??? You have an entire kingdom and you’re telling me this is all they have to offer in terms of offense? This magic system was really not thought through at all

…if they have magic that can miraculously rebuild shoulder bones turned to dust, am I really supposed to believe they couldn’t reverse a cauterized fallopian tube? This is like SJM with the inability to do c-sections 😒

This is dumb

The focus on virginity is tiring

I am disgusted and struggling. I’m hoping this gets better, but some of these scenes are hard to read.

Is every single young bomardi man in this book a perverted asshole except the love interest? Every single one is disgusting ugh

I need this dude to die a horrible death

Ok the tone has definitely shifted away from YA, which is good. He reminds me of a bit of a mix of Cardan and Rhys haha

I’m not sure how I feel about this one. The main character is supposedly 25, but she reads like she’s 16. This isn’t supposed to be YA, but guess we’ll see if it breaks away from that vibe

Save me from overly saccharine pet names like cupcake -_-

I’m reminded why I didn’t enjoy this one much. So much focus on pregnancy and the baby. Overly saccharine. I just never seem to enjoy stories where this is the main focus