Melissa R > Recent Status Updates

keep swinging back and forth on whether I am going to stop reading this tbh. SA by mind control count up to 3. very careful to mention the teenage victims are probably 19 each time, I notice......k buddy

hmmm in the intro the author mentions that copyediting was almost nonexistent and i can kinda see that. i wish i hadn’t read the anniversary edition intro honestly bc he uses it to bash his previous editor in some kind of vengeful tantrum and made me skeptical from the beginning. also SA on a teenager by mind control three chapters in, come on man.

I usually try to save my judgements for the end but can anyone tell me if I should just not finish this? one of the narrators says she tends to emit Hemingway's style and boy I wish that were true because everyone is soooo annoying lmao. say less! also the multiple-narrators shtick doesn't work when everyone speaks in exactly the same corny overwritten attempt at sass

have you ever read a sentence construction so bad you immediately put the book down

this editor should be embarrassed. although why would they?? this book sold great. publishing is a mess. help me

hm i hope this improves soon

oh this bitch……..

this dude fuckin loves apples