This had potential, but I give up at 26%.
This particular fictional world is entirely unbelievable. Who has their work firefighter gear and radio with them for a pre-dawn swim?
Who repeatedly touches their brand new work collegue without prior consent?
The writing is clumsy and trying too hard. Instalove histrionics and blatant unprofessionalism … Ugh, this is awful. Not even skipping to the end.
— Mar 18, 2025 05:22PM
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