I like the story, very compelling. But at 60% in, it feels like walking into a room with 20 characters and they all come up to you talking at once. Some are telling current stories, some are telling stories from 20 years ago, some are giving you the history of the world. If you’re going to have THIS many characters, you’ve got to wrap up some loose ends as you go. You can’t have 135 threads!
— Nov 01, 2024 04:58PM
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