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This is a slog so far. The author can't decide what stage the characters relationship is at and is trying to do way to much with so many descriptive words. The main characters just started kissing in the middle of a school class tour of a building site and suddenly they are also 10 stories up? It's hurting my head

I like the idea so far, and the characters. The details keep throwing me out of the story though I.e. the hero sleeping on the couch when there's two twin beds in the baby's room he could sleep on, and the heroine buying all new baby gear when the hero was travelling with a toddler for days already and moving internationally so must of had a lot of it on them, or he should of been organising for it with his team

Have abandoned currently. The age gap is 34 to 20, and they mention it so much I can't pretend the heroine is older. I don't want to read about a 20 y.o. with a 34 y.o. man. If the youngest person in the relationship is under 25 then I have a 5-7 year gap maximum. This gap is not my thing