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Yeah, now we're losing stars.

This book is fascinating. It's one turn away from being either a 3 star or a 5 star.

I really don't know what to do with this book at this point.

I love Grady Hendrix. I've at least enjoyed all of his books, really loved a few. But this is one of the worst editing jobs I've ever read in a professionally published book. I am not gifted at picking up continuity errors. So the amount of continuity errors and contradictions and small plot holes I'm catching in this book is pretty irritating and immensely distracting. Also it's his worst job writing women so far.

I started out really liking the first few chapters. But now I feel dirty, and vaguely upset by it. And not in a healthy, convicting way. This is not a healthy book.