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Mari is finished with Once Upon a Broken Dream: A Creativia Anthology
As the editor states, the prompt promised no prince or happily ever after. Some of the stories will end in unhappiness, but the writing is superb. If you love short stories with different endings, this is the book you have been waiting to read.
Nov 28, 2017 08:07AM Add a comment
Once Upon a Broken Dream: A Creativia Anthology

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Mari is finished with The Secret of Excalibur (Excalibur Saga #1)
The concept is wonderful. I was intrigued and blown away by the entire idea behind the story, but any book that contains three ly adverbs in one sentence over and over again needs some severe editing. The heroine doesn't walk, she glides every where. This created a vision of her floating. The idea that a lesbian would change overnight is ridiculous. It doesn't happen. A few of the sex scenes where unnecessary.
Aug 10, 2017 07:57AM Add a comment
The Secret of Excalibur (Excalibur Saga #1)

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