Clumsy phrasing, POV keeps jumping without warning between the two main character and at least one other that I picked, information that would have made one of the character more sympathetic appeared two chapters in and I don't know if it explains stuff or just comes out of nowhere, the characterisation seems slightly inconsistent on the other character, author keeps telling something and showing something else.
— May 02, 2016 01:28AM
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