I am not loving this AT ALL. In fact, I kind of hate it. Jill "Doll" Blaine is annoying. Don't enjoy the dips into her life. Hate the weird quotation marks around "slurpee cup" & other words. I get it why Saunders did it but annoying. If this weren't so short I'd abandon it right now. It's also very message-heavy & don't like that. I agree, George, but the heavy hand of the message is defeating the story.
— Feb 26, 2026 01:23AM
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