I was enjoying this story, until a mistake in the editing distracted me. Ryan and Louise are interviewing Gemma in the dining room. There is a paragraph devoted to describing the dining room. They talk back and forth. Then Louise asks Gemma a question, gesturing to the DESK. Gemma glances at the DESK, answers the question, and leaves the dining room. The problem? The desk is in the LIBRARY, scene of the crime. Sigh
— Aug 04, 2022 11:38AM
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