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This is not doing it for me.

I am already _way_ into this.

'.. I read it because it was titled The Rat Race, but it wasn't about a rat race at all! It should have been called The People Race!' Paraphrasing this, but I laughed so hard. I have had this same problem with books before, especially as a kid! It is so funny to have someone else say it.

This is pretty good, but I think it should have been called something about the puppets. I feel like it's more of a puppet horror story than anything to do with a haunted house.

This is pretty good. I love the ideas and the world, but it is moving kind of slow. I hope it picks up.