Caroline Lewis > Recent Status Updates

My pet hate is when a mannerism is overused. I'm only on page 25 and "kisses her teeth" has been used three or four times already. I'm not even sure how you kiss your teeth. And what would you be trying to convey? Is it like a "tsk"?

This is an intriguing crime/mystery with some laugh out loud moments.

Quirky. Funny. Difficult to pigeonhole. I'm enjoying this.

Oh great, one of the characters is written in second person. Is this a thing now? Not a fan.