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This book is incredibly outdated, and as a result is hugely unbelievable. It comes across as fear-mongering targeted for Baby Boomers who don’t understand how the internet works.

On top of that, the book itself is surprisingly badly written. Terrible dialogue, a lack of believable characters, and most jarringly it is constantly jumping around in places of time and I am constantly disorientated.

Okay, so I need to note that while this is definitely really well written (by self publishing standards, anyway) I am noticing more and more editing issues. Typos, repetition, over-writing and redundancy . . . Really disappointing that they've slipped through.