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So far, the main story is interesting. However, I am irritated at how crude Verity’s autobiography is.

I am not marking every mistake, but oh Lord. It’s like the author vomited commas.

I am enjoying the story, HOWEVER, there are countless errors. Lots of commas used incorrectly or not at all. Lots of wrong words or wrong tenses. It sucks me out of the story every time I have to reread a section because of the poor editing.

Please, I beg of this author - get a better editor for any future projects. I am getting frustrated to the point that I just want to abandon this.

It’s dragging a bit…. I want Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth to hurry up and get married already.

O.M.G. I am gutted. Darcy has died and I am literally sobbing. So we’ll written…..

I really hate the Elliot family... except Anne of course

I should say I can’t seem to care about the modern story. The story from the 80’s has me intrigued.

Well written, and somewhat interesting- but I still can’t seem to care about it much.

So far it is interesting, but I am wondering if there is a point.

so far, I am enjoying this. I wasn't sure I would want to see Lou moving on, but like seeing how everyone is dealing/has dealt with their grief.

Intriguing premise - I am enjoying it for the most part. There are some bits that really just add words instead of enhancing anything. But, I am eager to learn more about the owner of the abandoned apartment. The fact that this is based on a true story makes it all the more interesting.