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Man, Amethyst really turned into an annoying brat. Booooo

Typos. Shallower character interactions and connections than first book. Finding myself really having to push myself to finish this but I am enjoying the humor.

Formatting is not great and the dialog between characters has plummeted in believability and naturalness. Ugh.

Prediction: mushrooms.

Ugh I really hate how “snarky” the author tried to make the dialog. It just makes the characters sound juvenile and full of themselves.

It was going somewhere!! And then it devolved back into sex. Oyy.

Idk if I can continue. It’s just one sex scene after another. There are hints of plot but nothing actually happens besides a lot of sex.

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Idk if I want to finish this. There is no plot. Lots of banging. Nice spice but no plot. Character development is also taking a bit long.

Mostly just smut. I thought a couple of times that there was going to be some plot/conflict (Amber’s jealousy, red pills, etc…) but then nothing happens. Just another sex scene.

The dialogue. It’s so bad. It doesn’t flow, it doesn’t sound natural. It’s flat. It’s all “I’m sorry” and “I love you” over and over again. Plus, when multiple characters are in agreement, they ALL have to contribute. Also, a lot of the action is summarized instead of being experienced. I still want to know how it’s all going to turn out but the dialogue is hard to get through sometimes.

As soon as Dane said “57 times,” I knew what was going on.

The most monotonous and whiny dialogue I’ve ever read.

The dialog. Good God.

I really thought (based on the description and an insta ad) there would be more stalking “excitement” but it’s almost a minor detail. I’m also not too into what Rune and Scarlet are into so the spice isn’t really great for me. I want to like Rune more than I do. So far it’s a 3 stars for me.

I have been waiting for the action to really begin in this book and it didn’t really get going until 80%!! But it’s so good!!

The scene with Lachlan and his family is the best one so far… all the amity has been too abundant and too cringey and the dialogue is 👎🏻👎🏻👎🏻

The plot would be moving faster if there wasn’t so much smutt fluff. I don’t mind the spicy scenes and I get that she has 7 mates, but not every chapter has to have a sex scene!

So many grammatical errors… but I’m enjoying it so far

Def just here for the plot now. The sex scenes are written well, I’m just not into Daddy kink, praise kink, or MM. I do like all of the characters though.

I’m not sure I like the smut so far… not really my cup of tea. And the dialogue feels not realistic? Immature?