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There’s a lot of dialog that just explains things, hardly any plot. Action happens off page for the most part. I like the characters so far but wish something would actually happen… they’re in a trial! Action should be happening that’s not just them sitting around trying to puzzle things out!

Man, Amethyst really turned into an annoying brat. Booooo

Typos. Shallower character interactions and connections than first book. Finding myself really having to push myself to finish this but I am enjoying the humor.

Formatting is not great and the dialog between characters has plummeted in believability and naturalness. Ugh.

Prediction: mushrooms.

Ugh I really hate how “snarky” the author tried to make the dialog. It just makes the characters sound juvenile and full of themselves.

It was going somewhere!! And then it devolved back into sex. Oyy.

Idk if I can continue. It’s just one sex scene after another. There are hints of plot but nothing actually happens besides a lot of sex.

HOLY BOOK BOYFRIENDS BATMAN!

Idk if I want to finish this. There is no plot. Lots of banging. Nice spice but no plot. Character development is also taking a bit long.

Mostly just smut. I thought a couple of times that there was going to be some plot/conflict (Amber’s jealousy, red pills, etc…) but then nothing happens. Just another sex scene.

The dialogue. It’s so bad. It doesn’t flow, it doesn’t sound natural. It’s flat. It’s all “I’m sorry” and “I love you” over and over again. Plus, when multiple characters are in agreement, they ALL have to contribute. Also, a lot of the action is summarized instead of being experienced. I still want to know how it’s all going to turn out but the dialogue is hard to get through sometimes.

As soon as Dane said “57 times,” I knew what was going on.