It’s obvious Ashley Flowers isn’t a writer first. Much of the writing needed a good revising as she makes redundant phrasing, needless observations, and a whole lot of telling rather than showing. Overall though, All Good People Here is a solid story with a decent plot and pacing. I’m not going to say the culprit was obvious, because there is a good twist, but the pieces are easy to put together as you read.
— Sep 20, 2022 03:15AM
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